I'm just going to take these steps,
one by one
left then right.
Look before I step,
but hope to find something.
Maybe something dangerous,
maybe something happy or sad,
just something...
Because every new beginning,
comes from another end.
I wish I knew where I'm going,
or how to get there, but
maybe that is part of the fun...
You only live once, no map
no direction where to go..
But I'm going to make the best of this adventure,
smile and keep walking,
one step at a time..
Not bad. Some more attempts at creating a flow of words through rhythm and careful word choice would be a good improvement. Also, try to push yourself in trying to use a little more imagery - engage the senses a little more where possible.
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